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Rockin out, tourin cross the USA
Kevin, Nick, and Joe you steal our hearts away

Your lyrics in your songs are so real and true
It’s no wonder that so many people like you

I sing your songs everyday when I’m walking down the hall
And people think I’m crazy but I don’t care at all

It must be tough to be famous and want to be normal
It’s like wanting to dress casual when you have to dress formal

No doubt in my mind that Jonas Brothers are the best
Cause in the music race you outrun the rest
Please note:

I don't know much about the Jonas Brothers so this poem does not reflect my personal views about them.

I wrote this for two of my friends who are entering a contest for the Jonas Brothers, but since my two friends say they aren't good at writing they asked me to do it for them.

I actually liked how this turned out; I was going around and asking everyone if they knew anything at all about the Jonas Brothers so that way I could write this poem.

I would love some CONSTRUCTIVE critiques, so please don't hold back. I wanna know what you think!

(C) 2008
(C) TourEdge
Picture (C) Google [Images i guess?]
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:icondotjuh:
dotjuh Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
OmJ! Love it! :D
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GingerxBreadxCookie Featured By Owner May 26, 2009
I like it!
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Lillie-Silverdog Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2008
I love this one you have to send me a message which Jonas Brother is you favorite
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:iconxayowitz:
Xayowitz Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2008
It really has good meaning on the subject of the J.Bs. That's all I meant. It's right on subject.
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:icontouredge:
TourEdge Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2008
Oh, okay. I gets it now. Thankies! *tackle-hugs*
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:iconxayowitz:
Xayowitz Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2008
HOLY CRAP! 0___0

IT IS AWESOME.

So much meaning...
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:icontouredge:
TourEdge Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2008
Thanks! But what do you mean by "so much meaning?" I just want some positive things to make my other poems better.
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